Menu
Forums
New posts
Search forums
What's new
New posts
New profile posts
Latest activity
Vault
Time Travel Schematics
T.E.C. Time Archive
The Why Files
Have You Seen...?
Chronovisor
TimeTravelForum.tk
TimeTravelForum.net
ParanormalNetwork.net
Paranormalis.com
ConspiracyCafe.net
Streams
Live streams
Featured streams
Multi-Viewer
Members
Current visitors
New profile posts
Search profile posts
Log in
Register
What's new
Search
Search
Search titles only
By:
New posts
Search forums
Menu
Log in
Register
Navigation
Install the app
Install
More options
Contact us
Close Menu
Forums
General Discussion Forum
General Discussion
"Fifty Shades of Grey" by E.L. James
JavaScript is disabled. For a better experience, please enable JavaScript in your browser before proceeding.
You are using an out of date browser. It may not display this or other websites correctly.
You should upgrade or use an
alternative browser
.
Reply to thread
Message
<blockquote data-quote="Samstwitch" data-source="post: 61227" data-attributes="member: 2770"><p><span style="font-size: 15px">True! Well, I just found out that <em>Fifty Shades of Grey</em> is a Trilogy, so that explains the ending. The basics of the story intrigued me, it kept me interested. But the style of writing and overuse of phrases, such as her "inner goddess" and a number of other phrases ("down there" and her "sex" were used to reference her lower female anatomy) was ridiculous. It sounded as if a teenager wrote it. And a 27-year-old self-made BILLIONAIRE who was expert at numerous things, i.e. helicopter pilot, pianist, etc. and who rarely worked was ridiculous. If they took out the porn, the story would have been a lot better. I'm not against erotica in a story, but this was porn and poorly written. It says "erotic and sexy" but it was certainly none of that. </span></p><p> </p><p><span style="font-size: 15px">It was also <em>very obvious</em> to me that the main character, Anastasia, was taken from Bella's character in the <em>Twilight</em> Series, as were other characters in the story.</span></p><p> </p><p></p><p> </p><p><span style="font-size: 15px">Exactly! Today's Bestsellers would be thrown in the garbage if they had been introduced years ago. I read the Twilight Series...Nothing but BAD FAN FICTION! They had a very good Director for the movies, because he took out the best parts and strengthened the weak parts...and I did enjoy the movie versions. <span style="font-size: 15px">The last 2 books in the series had ridiculous story lines, as is apparent in the last 2 movies. I laughed when I saw the most recent movie in the Series on the screen. </span></span><span style="font-size: 15px">The Twilight Series was very, very poorly written, LOTS of unnecessary dialogue and it was grueling to read, because it was so boring. </span></p><p> </p><p><span style="font-size: 15px">If they took all the junk out of the Twilight Series, they could have had 2 better books in the instead of 4 crappy ones.</span></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Samstwitch, post: 61227, member: 2770"] [SIZE=4]True! Well, I just found out that [I]Fifty Shades of Grey[/I] is a Trilogy, so that explains the ending. The basics of the story intrigued me, it kept me interested. But the style of writing and overuse of phrases, such as her "inner goddess" and a number of other phrases ("down there" and her "sex" were used to reference her lower female anatomy) was ridiculous. It sounded as if a teenager wrote it. And a 27-year-old self-made BILLIONAIRE who was expert at numerous things, i.e. helicopter pilot, pianist, etc. and who rarely worked was ridiculous. If they took out the porn, the story would have been a lot better. I'm not against erotica in a story, but this was porn and poorly written. It says "erotic and sexy" but it was certainly none of that. [/SIZE] [SIZE=4]It was also [I]very obvious[/I] to me that the main character, Anastasia, was taken from Bella's character in the [I]Twilight[/I] Series, as were other characters in the story.[/SIZE] [SIZE=4]Exactly! Today's Bestsellers would be thrown in the garbage if they had been introduced years ago. I read the Twilight Series...Nothing but BAD FAN FICTION! They had a very good Director for the movies, because he took out the best parts and strengthened the weak parts...and I did enjoy the movie versions. [SIZE=4]The last 2 books in the series had ridiculous story lines, as is apparent in the last 2 movies. I laughed when I saw the most recent movie in the Series on the screen. [/SIZE][/SIZE][SIZE=4]The Twilight Series was very, very poorly written, LOTS of unnecessary dialogue and it was grueling to read, because it was so boring. [/SIZE] [SIZE=4]If they took all the junk out of the Twilight Series, they could have had 2 better books in the instead of 4 crappy ones.[/SIZE] [/QUOTE]
Insert quotes…
Verification
Post reply
Forums
General Discussion Forum
General Discussion
"Fifty Shades of Grey" by E.L. James
This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
Accept
Learn more…
Top