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NYC 1911
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<blockquote data-quote="TimeFlipper" data-source="post: 189711" data-attributes="member: 6456"><p>Would you be kind enough my old friend, to critique the story I wrote on here please?...Tell me what you dislike about it, or simply take the piss out of it.....It is important to me that our members tell me what is not right about the story in their own opinion...Obviously I prefer our members doing that compared to asking family members or friends or even neighbours who have no real grasp of Time-Travel like we all have on Paranormalis <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite38" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />.. </p><p></p><p>I will be preparing other Time-Travel stories that i will be posting on here in a few months time, please be patient with me <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite38" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />..</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="TimeFlipper, post: 189711, member: 6456"] Would you be kind enough my old friend, to critique the story I wrote on here please?...Tell me what you dislike about it, or simply take the piss out of it.....It is important to me that our members tell me what is not right about the story in their own opinion...Obviously I prefer our members doing that compared to asking family members or friends or even neighbours who have no real grasp of Time-Travel like we all have on Paranormalis :).. I will be preparing other Time-Travel stories that i will be posting on here in a few months time, please be patient with me :).. [/QUOTE]
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