Traveller's Tale

[Mayhem]

Thanks for clarifying.

Nevertheless a good read.

 

[taykair]

Could have been better. Most of Part Two was practically incoherent. Part Three was rushed. I'm my worst critic.

Thanks for reading.

 

[Mayhem]

A writer in the most part is the worst critic, but you are right unless you a have another to condemn or evaluate your work,
its all in your hands.

 

[TimeFlipper]

@taykair I only got involved at a later stage in your stories

 

[taykair]

@taykair I only got involved at a later stage in your stories

Damn! That only confirms my suspicion that Part One needs work as well.