Thanks for clarifying. Nevertheless a good read.
Mar 30, 2018 #21 Mayhem Senior Member Zenith Messages 6,746 Thanks for clarifying. Nevertheless a good read.
Mar 30, 2018 #22 taykair Member Messages 363 Could have been better. Most of Part Two was practically incoherent. Part Three was rushed. I'm my worst critic. Thanks for reading.
Could have been better. Most of Part Two was practically incoherent. Part Three was rushed. I'm my worst critic. Thanks for reading.
Mar 30, 2018 #23 Mayhem Senior Member Zenith Messages 6,746 A writer in the most part is the worst critic, but you are right unless you a have another to condemn or evaluate your work, its all in your hands.
A writer in the most part is the worst critic, but you are right unless you a have another to condemn or evaluate your work, its all in your hands.
Mar 30, 2018 #24 TimeFlipper Senior Member Messages 13,705 @taykair I only got involved at a later stage in your stories
Mar 30, 2018 #25 taykair Member Messages 363 TimeFlipper said: @taykair I only got involved at a later stage in your stories Click to expand... Damn! That only confirms my suspicion that Part One needs work as well.
TimeFlipper said: @taykair I only got involved at a later stage in your stories Click to expand... Damn! That only confirms my suspicion that Part One needs work as well.